For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short composition entitled The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured).

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short composition entitled The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured). You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
    1.简单叙述一下这位同学生病(或受伤)的情况
    2.同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的
    3.人与人之间的这种关爱给我的感受是……

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答案 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill Yesterday when we were having our English class, a classmate sitting in front of me began to vomit suddenly. Before the class began, he had said he felt sick, but we didn’t take it seriously. Immediately my English teacher came up to him, looking at him worriedly. At the same time, some students ran out to get the mop, broom and dustpan, while someone fetched bottles of water and I passed the water and some napkin paper to his desk mate. At last when he stopped vomiting, the teacher asked the monitor and another student to accompany him to the school clinic. What happened touched me deeply. The world we live in is full of love and warmness. If everyone lends others a hand when they are in trouble, our society will be more harmonious.

解析     第一段简单叙述同学生病的时间、地点及情况。
    第二段以时间为主线,描述老师、同学和“我”对生病同学的帮助。首句中的现在分词短语looking at him worriedly作状语。
    第三段描述感受,只要人人伸出援手,社会将更加和谐。What happened touched me deeply.The world we live in is full of love and warmness.这两个句子虽然不长,但都使用了从句结构,第一个句子含有主语从句,第二个句子包含定语从句,使句式多样化。
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