For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Criticism. You should write at least 120 words fol

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Criticism.
    You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
    1. 批评在日常生活中很常见
    2. 不同的人对待批评的态度不同
    3. 我的看法

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答案 Criticism It is not surprising in everyday life that people are criticized for some reasons. Students may be criticized by their parents or teachers [1] possibly because they have done a bad job in exams. [2] If workers could not accomplish their tasks, they would not be free from criticism by their boss. People have different attitudes toward criticism. [3] When criticized, some people become annoyed and [4] try every possible means to defend themselves, regarding criticism as injustice or nonsense. However, others hold that criticism will help them get aware of their shortcomings, so criticism may become a good chance of success in their life. In my opinion, while criticism makes unpleasant feelings, we should not [5] turn a deaf ear to it. Actually, criticism [6] contributes to good results in most cases. [7] Just as the Chinese saying goes, "Good medicine that tastes bitter will help one’s illness."

解析 [1] 意思为“也许”,相当于probably,使句子语气变得很含蓄。
[2] 利用虚拟语气陈述某种现象或事实。
[3] 连词when后面接过去分词criticized,使句子变得简练。
[4] 意思为“千方百计”。类似表达法有try hard to,make every effort to,spare no efforts to, endeavor to等。
[5] 意思为“对……充耳不闻”。类似表达法有do nothing about。
[6] 意思为“导致”。类似表达法有bring about,lead to等。
[7] 用于引用谚语的结构。类似表达法有just as the Chinese proverb says。
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