Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition.

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问题     Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition.
    You should include the details you think necessary.
    You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.
    Do not write the address. (10 points)

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答案 Honorable President, I am privileged to write to you about how to improve students’ physical condition in our campus. My proposals are as follows. Firstly, since students are not getting enough workouts, I think it is essential that our school arrange adequate PE lessons in per week courses, giving us more opportunities to strengthen our body. Secondly, I propose that we should add a variety of PE courses, such as swimming, bowling, and yoga, which will stimulate mass participation in sports. Finally, I hope that our university can regularly organize a large number of extracurricular activities. I hope the above suggestions could be taken and the health conditions of our college students could be improved considerably. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

解析     第一段开门见山,点出写此信的目的。第二段分条具体叙述解决的方法,没有多余的寒暄废话,用了Firstly等关键引导词,条理清晰,说理明确。最后一段表达出希望建议被采纳,并回归到“改善身体状况”的主题。整个文章语言得体、建议合理且言简意赅。
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