For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Overpackaging. You should write at least 150 words acc

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Overpackaging. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below.
1.现在不少商品都存在过度包装现象
2.出现这一现象的原因及其带来的后果
3.为了改变这种状况,我认为……
                            Overpackaging

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答案 Overpackaging (1) Nowadays it is not rare to see that some very small items are wrapped in the boxes which are as big as shoeboxes. (1) And it is also quite common that we have to open several boxes or wrappers before we finally see the product we buy. These examples illustrate that overpackaging has become a phenomenon widespread in our daily life. (2) What are the causes of this problem? (3) Firstly, in order to make more profits, many manufactures usually wrap their products with many unnecessary materials. (3) Secondly, many customers think that the delicately packaged goods are (4) superior to those with plain packaging. The emergence of excessive packaging has resulted in many bad effects that can’t be neglected. (5) It is not only a waste of materials but also creates a huge amount of domestic waste which contributes to the environmental problems. (6) To change this situation, I think we should take the following measures. (7) On the one hand, laws must be made to (4) impose restrictions on packaging. (7) On the other hand, the government should use various media to arouse customers’ awareness that packaging doesn’t equal to quality, and also let them know its bad impact.

解析 (1)举例说明,更有说服力
(2)利用问句引出原因
(3)从两个方面说明造成这一现象的原因,一目了然
(4)精彩短语:“优于”;“设限”
(5)固定句型:“不但……而且……”。说明两个危害
(6)引出自己的建议
(7)从两个方面说明自己的建议
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