The fast pace of modem society helps people realize the preciousness of time. So it is very important for them to keep punctual

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问题    The fast pace of modem society helps people realize the preciousness of time. So it is very important for them to keep punctual under whatever circumstances.
   Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
                                         The Importance of Being Punctual
   You are to write in three parts.
   In the first part, state specifically what your view is.
   In the second part, support your view with one or two reasons.
   In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 The Importance of Being Punctual The intensive competition and fast pace of modem society have made people realize the true meaning of "Time is money". Therefore, being punctual has become an essential requirement in social communication. As far as I am concerned, this increasing importance of being punctual is well justified. First of all, time is the most valuable commodity one can have and we are not given very much of it whilst on this planet. Therefore, we should do our best to utilize it efficiently each and every day, which in turn will help us develop our self discipline. Moreover, being punctual is to show your respect to others and in turn you will receive others’ respect. Wasting others’ time by forcing them to wait is a sign of disorganized living, which is also seen as an insult to those kept waiting, as if to say "Your time is not that important." to them. In business, being late even only a few times may make the difference between your getting a promotion and being kept "in your place". In school, bursting open the dour of the lecture hall to announce "I’m sorry I’m late, Sir." may precede a likely prejudiced and unfavorable grade. To come to a conclusion, punctuality should be held in high esteem in modem society, because it not only helps to demonstrate and develop a personal style of preciseness, but also is the basic etiquette in social interactions.

解析    如今,社会竞争越来越激烈,人们也越加认识到了守时的重要性。题目要求考生就“遵守时间的重要性”这一观点展开论述,为典型的支持说明型文章。
   分析文章结构,第一部分给出背景知识并表明自己对话题观点的支持;第二部分从两个方面论证该观点的正确、合理性;第三段进行总结,重申该观点。可参见以下结构模版:
第一部分:引言
   ·背景+中心:背景一般为1—2个句子,采用描述情形的方式,可以是当前主要情形,当前情形+过去情形,或者当前情形的两个方面。在中心思想句中对文章题目做进一步解释。
第二部分:主体
   -本部分可由1—2个自然段构成,每个自然段段首为段落主题句,即用于支持文章中心的分论点(2—3个)。
   -一般采用列举法展开各个分论点,说明重要性、危害性或者有利之处等表现在哪几个方面。
第三部分:结尾
   -重要性:重要性+建议或展望
   -危害性:危害性+警示
   -有利性:有利性+建议或展望
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