2. 外语
  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Internet Celebrities. You should write at least 120

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Internet Celebrities. You should write at least 120

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Internet Celebrities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
    1. 近年来出现了大量因不同原因而出名的网络名人
    2．有人认为这是网络时代的进步，有人认为他们的出现是一种退步
    3．你的看法
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答案 On Internet Celebrities [1]In recent years a variety of Internet celebrities have emerged with different stories.[2]Some folks consider it a cultural progress in this network era while some hold the opposite opinion.[3] I prefer to agree that this phenomenon is a progress. [4]First,the emergence of those celebrities represents the free expression of new ideas,either creative or queer. [5]New idea is a very important aspect in the development of this fast-moving world.[6]Second,the society’s acceptance to the celebrities indicates that we are more open-minded and willing to take in new stuff than before.[7]With more new ideas and open-minded sense, we are able to create an all-round diversified society. [8]All in all,the emergence of Internet celebrities,to some extent,is our progress in developing a more diversifted society.
解析 [1]提出现象，对应提纲中的第1点。with different stories说明了网络名人出名的原因和过程的不同，stories用得正好，比用reasons地道。
[2]用转折词while指出两种不同的看法，consider和hold的交替使用让用词不显单调。the opposite opinion概括性强，使行文简洁。
[3]明确提出自己的观点，引出下文的重点阐述。prefer to…用语地道，优于think等。
[4][5][6][7]First...Second...从“新思想的表达” 和“社会文化的多样性”这两个角度沦证。使用fast-moving，open-minded，all-round等复合词，使表达简洁、地道。queer“奇怪的；诡异的”，是亮点词汇。
[7]with+名词为亮点句型，表明在前面两点的铺垫下，自然得出的结果。
[8]用All in all总结全文。其中to some extent留有余地，使观点不偏激不绝对。
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