Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on Online Shopping. You should wri

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问题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on Online Shopping. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
   1. 网上购物渐渐成为一种时尚,越来越多的大学生选择网上购物
   2.分析大学生网上购物的原因
   3.我对此现象的看法
                              My View on Online Shopping

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答案 My View on Online Shopping (1)In the era of network, online shopping has become one of the modern means by which people do their shopping. More and more college students are enjoying the convenience and fun that netwo

解析 本文是一篇六级作文考试中常见的议论文,要求考生就“大学生网上购物”展开讨论。题目要求考生首先描述这一现象,其次分析原因,最后表达自己的看法,是典型的现象解释型作文。
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   一、描述背景,引出现象
   1.描述背景:网络时代,网上购物成为一种流行趋势(network,online shopping,modern)
   2.引出现象:大学生选择网上购物,享受其带来的方便和乐趣(college students,enjoy,convenience,fun)
   二、分析原因
   1.原因一:网上购物价格便宜,能省钱(lower price,save money)
   2.原因二:网上购物资源丰富,能买到商场里买不到的东西(a wealth of commodity information,available,everything conceivable)
   3.原因三:网上购物不用排队,只需点鼠标(instead of queuing up,a few clicks of mouse)
   三、“我”的看法:更多人将接受网购,享受到选择多、价位低的好处(accept,cheaper shopping,more selections)
   (1)in the era of意为“在…时代”。
   (2)过渡句,提出问题。
   (3)分析原因的常用表达。
   (4)First of all,Besides,Moreover,分析网上购物流行的三条原因。
   (5)In other words意为“换言之”,进一步解释上文所表达的意思。
   (6)常用来引出个人观点。
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