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  3. You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "Environment Protection". You should base your composition on the out

You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "Environment Protection". You should base your composition on the out

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问题 You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "Environment Protection". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
(1)当前我们面临着严重的环境问题。
(2)造成问题的主要原因是……
(3)如何有效解决环境问题。
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答案 The pollution of environment has been a hot potato for many countries. And it is also true in China. Although the government has taken measures to address the problem, and people are becoming increasingly environment-conscious, the situation is still deteriorating. Each year factories and enterprises are responsible for millions of tons of wastes discharged into the air and water. Consequently, some rivers and lakes have been made fishless; and "red tide" has become an epidemic along the beaches. Soil erosion caused by misuse of the land comes to thousands of square kilometers. And decades of deforestation to expand farmland have brought down the trees, making drought worse and pushing the desert even closer. To clean up the environment, it’s necessary to monitor industry. On the one hand, factories should find out new ways to reuse waste and convert it into useful materials. On the other hand, water discharge and smoke emission must meet the standard set by the government. Moreover, more investment should be made in the "green projects", such as planting trees and grass, reforesting the land and so on. To sum up, while furthering economic development, We must not ignore environment protection.
解析     本文围绕已成为世界性难题的环境污染问题，重点分析了我国的具体情况和造成环境污染问题的原因。全文结构清晰、连贯性好。语言表达准确，用词、造句富于变化。在写作中，作者将提纲中宽泛的命题具体化，着重于讨论发生在我们周围的环境问题，这样在有限的篇幅内，文章的内容具体充实。另外，本文的结尾段的写作，采用了对应的手法，即针对上文分析的具体问题，提出相应的解决方案。同时，作者没有只提口号，而是提出具体的建议。这样使文章显得充实、具体、有内容。
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