Recently a newspaper has reported that salaries for college graduates are equivalent to wages for migrant workers. Apparently th

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问题     Recently a newspaper has reported that salaries for college graduates are equivalent to wages for migrant workers. Apparently this comparison is too simple and superficial. However, job-hunting is much more difficult for college graduates but may be easier for migrant workers. What’s your opinion?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
                                The Main Factors Influencing Salaries for College Graduates
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 The Main Factors Influencing Salaries for College Graduates Recently, salaries for college graduates have been relatively low, and there has been a heated argument about whether they should have higher salaries. Some people are for it; however, others are against it. As for me, I think we should view this problem rationally. Salaries for college graduates depend on many factors, and the main factors come from themselves. First of all, most graduates don’t master professional skills. Their focus of attention at university is mostly on passing various exams to get the diploma. Still, others are obsessed with surfing the Internet and seldom attend regular classes. Anyway, being unskilled in their specialty is the most important factor influencing their salaries. Secondly, many students overestimate themselves. Some college graduates think that they are superior to others and they always prefer higher salaries. But the fact is that they have learned a lot of theoretical knowledge which they cannot apply well into practice. Finally, the variety and limitation of majors can have an effect on salaries. Different fields promise different levels of salary in a short term. In conclusion, three main factors influence college graduates’ salaries, including professional skills, self-evaluation and majors. Hence college graduates should treat their salaries much more rationally.

解析     本题是给定观点型题目,要求考生就影响大学毕业生薪水的主要因素展开探讨。考生既可以从大学生自身角度来分析主要因素,也可以从社会角度分析,还可以结合两方面综合分析。
    开头部分本文首先提出问题,阐述两种对立的观点,之后表明自己的观点:大学毕业生的薪水由很多因素决定,尤其是自身的因素,要理性对待。
    中间部分运用“First of all…”“Secondly…”和“Finally…”从三个方面具体阐述了学生自身的影响因素,包括专业技能、自我评估及专业的不同。论证充分,合情合理。
    结尾部分使用“Inconclusion…”总结影响大学毕业生薪水的三个主要因素,并且呼吁大学生理性对待薪水问题。
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