For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Measures to Relieve Traffic Jam in three paragraph

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Measures to Relieve Traffic Jam in three paragraphs. You are given the first sentence or part of the first sentence of each paragraph. You should write at least 120 words.
1.Although it is convenient and enjoyable to own a car, people have to suffer troubles caused by traffic jam______.
2.Considering causes of the problem, measures could be taken by the local government in the following aspects______.
3.With a sound transportation system______,

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答案 Measures to Relieve Traffic Jam Although it is convenient and enjoyable to own a car, people have to suffer troubles caused by traffic jam. Today, cars are considered as an important transportation means, especially for those who have to commute between their offices in downtown area and their home in the outskirts of the city. ( 引出文章的主题) However, the convenience and comfort of driving one’s own car have been greatly compromised by traffic jam which might resulted in (“导致......结果" ) a long time of waiting on their way. Complaints are growing. Considering the causes of the problem, measures could be taken by the local government in the following aspects. First of all, since it has been found that traffic jam occurs most frequently at the crossings ( "十字路口" ) when vehicles are waiting for the traffic lights ("交通信号灯" ), it is advisable that the mechanism of traffic lights, its duration and its direction, should be adjusted. While at present, a car has to wait for two three turns before it can get through the crossing because there are cars going forward, turning right, and turning left; crossings with terrible traffic jam might consider to allow only two directions in the future. Secondly, most people buy private car due to an undeveloped public transportation system. Therefore, there is a great need to give priority to ("优先考虑") the development of public transit system ("公交体系") including subways and buses. Improved public transit will attract more people and thus diminish the number of private cars in the streets. With a sound transportation system, together with effective transportation guidance and regulation, the problem of traffic jam will be gradually solved.

解析     写作提示 这是一篇给出了各段首句的议论文,要求对各段首句进行扩展论述,很明显,三个句子就是三个段落的主题句,因此在扩展论述时,把握好论点,提供具体的支持分论点和论据就可以了,根据提纲,文章分为三段
    第一段描述目前的交通现状堪忧,在展开的时候可以适当地描写交通问题中比较严重的几点
    第二段着重写解决交通堵塞的措施,结合导致交通堵塞的原因写
    第三段写执行这些措施的可能结果,即这些措施实施之后是否能够缓解交通堵塞现象
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