Two days ago, you received a letter of admission from the Overseas Students Admission Office of University of British Columbia.

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问题     Two days ago, you received a letter of admission from the Overseas Students Admission Office of University of British Columbia.
    Write a reply letter to the Director to
    1)Show your appreciation, and
    2)Inquire about the scholarship.
    You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.
    Do not write the address.(10 points)

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答案 Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my deep gratitude to you and your colleagues’ hard work. The admission means a lot to me. Now, I am very excited and looking forward to studying in the university. Then, I would like to inquire about details on the scholarship for overseas students. What sort of qualifications do you need for the scholarship? I would be much obliged if you can provide me with some information on the procedures I should go through to apply for the scholarship. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

解析     该作文为书信回复,要求考生向录取院校回信表达感谢,并询问有关奖学金申请的事宜。要求文章结构清晰,语言简练,重点突出,尤其需要根据写作对象注意信件的语气和措辞。作为一封回信,首先要确认录取通知书已收到.随后表达感激之情。第二部分提出请求,咨询奖学金申请所需的资质及申请程序等问题,最后表达感谢.希望能得到相关信息。
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