You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "Shortage of Natural Resources". You should base your composition on

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问题 You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "Shortage of Natural Resources". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
(1)自然资源现状和未来。
(2)我国自然资源短缺的主要原因。
(3)解决办法。

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答案 The shortage of natural resources has aroused a worldwide concern, for with the rapid growth of population and industry, the more resources man uses, the less there will be left for the future generations. China is also facing such a problem. Although in almost every province are founded natural resources, the exceptionally large population makes our country 3 resource-deficient country. The natural resources per capita is rather limited. China’s per-capita arable land, for instance, accounts for only one-third of the average level worldwide. Moreover, our country’s natural resources are not structurally balanced. In terms of mineral resources, what we have is only a vast reserve of coal. And the situation is further complicated by the increasing amount of individual consumption. To ensure a sustainable development it’s time that we took measures to cope with the relationship between human demands and natural resources. And also we should educate all the people to practice economy when using water, fuels and other resources. And above all, the government should take actions to monitor the exploitation of resources.

解析     总的说来,这篇文章较为成功,文字比较流畅,总体结构安排合理。开头段开门见山,直接进入主题,点明人口和工业的迅速增长导致世界性资源短缺的主要原因。第二段重点议论了我国自然资源短缺的原因:一是人均资源不足,二是结构不平衡。最后一段针对性地提出了解决的方案,即需求和资源之间关系的协调,教育的重要作用以及政府的监管等。
    特别值得一提的是,本文作者深刻领会了提纲的要点——全球资源状况和我国面临的具体问题。这使得整篇文章主题鲜明,重点突出。
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