1. 据称,在你所在的社区将建立一个大型的购物中心; 2.发表你的意见并说出支持或反对的理由。 A Shopping Mall in the Neighborhood

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问题 1. 据称,在你所在的社区将建立一个大型的购物中心;
2.发表你的意见并说出支持或反对的理由。
                  A Shopping Mall in the Neighborhood

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答案 A Shopping Mall in the Neighborhood ① It is said that a joint venture company will invest large amount of money on building a modern shopping mall in the neighborhood of out community. ② The news has aroused much controversy among the residents. ③ As one member of this community, I vigorously oppose such a project. You know, our community is beautifully decorated with trees and flowers, filled with sweet air like a garden. ④ Once the shopping mall is built, our quiet life will be disturbed. ⑤ Furthermore, the flowing of large population will cause not only traffic jams, but also air and noise pollution. ⑥ In addition, the location of the shopping mall is reported to be just on the opposite to a primary school. How dangerous it is for the kids! Can the children concentrate their mind when kept in such a crowded business centre? ⑦ In a word, I strongly disapprove of this idea. I hope our community will keep clean and peaceful forever and every resident can enjoy this pleasurable life.

解析    ①审题及布局。这篇提纲式作文要求学生对题目所提出的现象或问题表明自己的观点,即对某一事件持赞同还是反对的意见,并说明自己的理由。写作时注意表述要清楚,论据要充分,有条理。在布局上,按照提纲的要求展开写作即可。第一段简单叙述得知要在自己所在的社区建立一个大型的购物中心这一消息;第二段说出自己的意见并说出自己支持或反对此举的理由;第三段为扩展,再次声明自己的观点。②语言。本文是一篇论说文[考频:9],可以多使用一些正式语言,增强文章的说服力,另外还可以通过变化句式、用词来增添情感色彩。就时态而言,因为多为讲述现在或将来的事实,采用一般现在时或将来时即可。
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   As one member of ______, I vigorously oppose such a project. You know, ______. Once ______, ______ will ______. Furthermore, ______ will ______. In addition, ______. How it is ______! ______?
   In a word, I strongly disapprove of this idea. I hope ______.
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