For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on Spam Message. You should write at least 120

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on Spam Message. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 目前,垃圾短信给人们的生活带来了许多的麻烦与困扰;
2.这种现象产生的原因;
3.如何解决这个问题。

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答案 My View on Spam Message With the increasing use of cell phones, spam message has become a hated problem. A piece of spam message can disturb, confuse, or threaten people at any time. There are several reasons for it. For senders, they can advertise their products in such a cheap way. What’s worse, some even make money by cheating receivers. For those in charge of personal information of cell phone users, some of them can not resist the temptation to make profit simply by disclosing information to those law breakers. To solve this problem, people should act together. Firstly, the government should set up laws to punish both senders and those who disclose information. Secondly, cell phone users should never make responses to spam message. Finally, researchers should develop software to help delete that rubbish automatically. With the joint efforts, the problem of spam message will definitely be solved some day.

解析     这篇作文主要讨论垃圾短信产生的原因以及解决的办法。在布局上,三个段落要有详有略:
    第一段可以略写,说明垃圾短信是扰民的现象;
    第二段写产生这种现象的原因,可以从利益的角度分析,哪些人能从垃圾短信中获利(垃圾短信发送者,手机用户信息泄露者等);
    最后一段提出有针对性的建议。
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