You are the manager of the Personnel Department of a company. Your company has conducted a survey of training needs. Look at the

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问题 You are the manager of the Personnel Department of a company. Your company has conducted a survey of training needs.
Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.
Then using all your handwritten notes, write your proposal.
Write 120-140 words.

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答案Proposal on Staff Training Priority Introduction The objective of this proposal is to compare the staff needs, and make precedence to the more important and needed ones. Findings Sales staff require for the English training would clearly bring more orders. It also meets the demand of new staff at trade department for the development strategy, which should be considered first. Furthermore , computer skills should be expanded to administration staff to bring more productivity and better investment, despite the cost is expensive. It would be helpful to reduce the budget by using internal training for the new staff. The current communication ability are working well, we should postpone this part. Recommendations The most important and urgent training is English. New staff should be trained internally and computer skills and presentation skills need to be organized.

解析     本文是对商务建议书的考查,内容要求是作为公司的人事经理,根据员工培训需求的调查,写一篇关于员工培训重点的建议书。内容方面,首先根据题目所给的信息,介绍此建议书的目的和所要建议的主题;要从题目中所给的不同员工培训的需求也不一样这一事实,简述其原因;最后紧扣主题,强调自己的建议和看法。结构和形式方面要按照商务建议书的格式书写,语言要准确,用词要合理,句式力求丰富多变。
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