Nowadays, WeChat’s functions of Shake and Message Bottle allow users to randomly connect to other users close by. However, it is

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问题     Nowadays, WeChat’s functions of Shake and Message Bottle allow users to randomly connect to other users close by. However, it is reported that most users aren’t aware of the potential risks brought about by WeChat’s positioning function when they are socializing with strangers. What do you think of WeChat? Should we give up using it for its potential risks? Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and then give your view on the issue.
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    Yes:
    WeChat’s positioning function may bring potential risks to young people when they socialize with strangers. No one can deny the fact that it is very dangerous to let strangers know the exact location of us since we do not know who they are and what they might do.
    In addition, the image and name of WeChat’s ID can be changed randomly. Criminals can change their images and names into ours and then it is quite possible for our friends to be cheated.
    What’s more, the wallet function of WeChat may bring about potential financial risks. Criminals may make use of these functions and steal the money in our WeChat wallet.
    No:
    It is unnecessary to say no to WeChat just because of the so-called "risks". If we have to abandon WeChat because of its positioning function, then in that case, a large number of applications with similar functions have to be abandoned as well, which sounds unreasonable and unrealistic.
    In addition, the " risks" depend on how we make use of WeChat. As an adult, we have the ability to judge in which case it is safe to utilize the positioning function.

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答案 My Viewpoint on WeChat’s Potential Risks In recent years, WeChat has gained popularity, and its functions of Shake and Message Bottle allow users to randomly connect to other users close by. However, some people worry about the potential risks brought about by WeChat’s positioning function when using it to socialize with strangers. As far as I am concerned, it goes to extremes to abandon an invention just because of its potential risks. Firstly, WeChat brings great convenience to the users’ communication. It overtakes other communication applications in several aspects. One is that it consumes less data flow compared with other tools, especially when sending an audio clip. Another is that it contains a game which ranks the users’ score among their friends and that adds spice to the users’ life. Secondly, WeChat pays more attention to privacy than other communication tools. For example, if someone leaves a message about your photo, nobody but your mutual friends can see the message. However, with other tools, everyone—as long as they are listed as your friends—can see all the messages your friends have left. All in all, while embracing the convenience of WeChat, we have to take measures to guard against its potential risks. As long as we are aware of the risks which are inherent in the software, we can safely enjoy the surprise brought by recent technological advancements.

解析     本文讨论的话题是一个流行的社交工具——微信。有人指出,微信的摇~摇和漂流瓶功能使陌生人能准确定位用户的位置,因而会有潜在危险。在具体行文方面,考生应首先概述正反方的观点。然后给出自己的观点:因为存在风险就放弃使用微信太过极端。接着阐述自己的理由。最后总结全文:在享受微信等高科技带来的便利的同时,我们要有意识地进行自我保护。
    开头部分介绍背景并引入话题:微信的一些功能允许用户随机联系附近的人。接着进行转折,简要概述反对的观点:有些人担心使用微信有潜在危险。
    中间部分通过“As far as I am concerned…”提出自己的观点:因为存在风险就放弃使用微信太过极端。并用“Firstly…”和“Secondly…”具体阐述理由:首先,微信给用户带来了极大的交流便利;其次,微信比其他社交软件更加注重保护隐私。
    结尾部分通过“All in all…”总结全文:在享受微信带来的便捷的同时,我们要积极防范风险,提高安全意识。
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