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As more and more college students prefer to rent a room outside the campus and enjoy their private life there, problems come alo

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问题   As more and more college students prefer to rent a room outside the campus and enjoy their private life there, problems come along. To solve these problems, the Ministry of Education stipulates that college students are not allowed to live outside the campus. This regulation raises heated discussion among students, and even among the whole society. What is your opinion on this issue? Write an essay of about 400 words entitled:
On College Students’ Living Off Campus
  In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
  Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
  Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.
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答案 Recently there has been a heated debate among college students on whether they should be allowed to live off campus.Some students maintain that they are adults so they should be granted the right to have their own separate rooms and enjoy privacy, while some others hold the opposite opinion.As far as I am concerned, students should not be granted the fight to live off campus for the following reasons. It’s not necessary for students to live outside the campus. Firstly, colleges provide sufficient and inexpensive dormitories for students, most of which, as far as I know, are clean and equipped with all the necessary facilities.Secondly, living on campus secures a good environment for study. The prime task of students is to study and acquire knowledge.A room on campus serves this purpose much better than one off campus,It provides college students with much more convenience to consult teachers or classmates whenever they are confronted with a problem in study.Thirdly, living in dormitories, together with their contemporaries, helps college students maintain closer relationships with classmates and enjoy friendships.On the contrary, renting houses off campus leads to less communication and emotional exchanges with other students and teachers, which will do harm to the development of students.So it’s quite unnecessary and even detrimental for students to live off campus. Students should be forbidden to live off campus.Firstly, on the part of colleges, since they are obligated to be liable for students’ safety, they should pay attention to the security of all the students, and thus the sensible decision to make is to ask all of them to live inside the campus for better administration.Secondly, as we all know, living off campus means everything is dependent on the landlord. This might pose a great threat to students’ safety.Therefore, for the good of students, colleges shouldn’t grant them the fight to live off campus. All things considered, it’s unnecessary or even harmful for students to live off campus. Students should drop the idea of living off campus and focus on how to manage their life on campus and prepare themselves well in study for a bright future.
解析   开门见山点明与主题相关的社会现象：Recently there is a...debate...on whether...。
  表达两种不同观点的典型句型：Some maintain that...，While some others...。
  As far as I am concerned是表达个人观点的惯用语。
  living on campus为动名词短语作主语，这种表达较为正式，下面[7][8]中的living in dormitories与renting houses off campus用法与此相同。Secure sth..是用词亮点，意为“保障……实现”。
  one指代a room；使用代词可避免行文繁琐，使表达简洁。
  be confronted with意为“面临，碰到”。
  contemporary意为“同代人，同辈”，其近义词为peer。
  on the contrary为表示对比的典型用语，除此之外，表示对比还可以用by contrast，in contrast，conversely等等。
  detrimental为正式用语，意为“对……有害的”。
  典型的复合长句表达，其主干为they should pay attention to...and thus the sensible decision to make is...；on the part of colleges为插入成分，since引导原因状语从句。 on the part of为固定搭配，意为“就……而言”；be obligated to和be liable for意义分别为“有义务做……”和“对……应负责任”。
  as we all know引出一个众所周知的情况，类似的短语有It is widely acknowledged that...，It is well known that...，It is admitted that...等等。
  for the good of意为“为了……好”，其同义词组有for the sake of，in the interest of等。
  All things considered为典型结束用语，意为“总而言之”，类似的短语有：In conclusion，In summary，All in all，In a word， It can be concluded from the discussion that...，It may be safely said that...等等。
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