For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Scientific Breakthroughs in China. You should write at

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Scientific Breakthroughs in China. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: The number of scientific breakthroughs over the past years in China(Estimated)

1.上图所示为中国近几年的科学创新情况,请描述其变化
2.请说明发生这些变化的原因
3.对此进行预测
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答案 Scientific Breakthroughs in China The number of scientific breakthroughs in China has grown very fast over the past years. In 2001, the number was almost 50. In 2002, the number was about 100 and in 2004 the number was four times as big as 2001. In my point of view, one reason of this growth is the development of modern science. Scientists care more about the areas which are not exploited and the working environment has improved a lot. They have modern equipments and conditions. Another reason is that China has become more and more powerful nowadays. The Chinese government has invested a large sum of money in the breakthrough field and encouraged scientists to devote themselves to the scientific breakthroughs because it is extremely crucial to a country. Scientific breakthroughs stand for innovation and innovation is the soul of a country. In my opinion, scientific breakthroughs in China will increase very fast in the future. More and more fields will be exploited by the scientists. I believe China will become stronger in the near future.

解析     这次的作文是看图表作文。文章第一段应该根据图表先对中国这几年科学创新的变化做一个描述。接下来,文章的第二段应该罗列出这些创新变化产生的原因,一方面是现代科学技术的发展,另一方面是中国政府十分重视科学创新并为科学创新领域提供了大量的资金支持。文章的结尾应提出对未来科学创新发展的预测.而在两者比较的表达上,可以运用four times as big as…,twice/three times as large/long…as或者three times the length/size of that one等表达方式。文章写作过程中,在表达数字概念时可以运用以下表达方式,如:the number of…,the amount of…或the figure of…表达原因可以运用的句式为one reason of…is,another reason is…相关表达方法还有on one hand…on the other hand…或For one thing…For another…等。在表达个人的观点方面可以运用in my opinion,in my point of view或from my perspective等。
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