Should Lawbreakers Be Sent to Prison or to Work? Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. But others thi

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问题     Should Lawbreakers Be Sent to Prison or to Work?
    Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. But others think that they should be made to work. What do you think? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    Should Lawbreakers Be Sent to Prison or to Work?
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
    In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

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答案 Should Lawbreakers Be Sent to Prison or to Work? The essence of law is rehabilitation and retribution, which deter potential lawbreakers and punish those who break the law. In the spirit of this, I think serious law offenders should be sent to prison, while those with mild offence could be made to work. On the one hand, the deprivation of freedom is a fearsome consequence which rehabilitates criminals and deters potential ones. Imprisonment confines one’s movements and actions, which force him to repent his crime. It is hoped that criminals will feel guilty and regretful by serving time in prison, thus transforming themselves into a law-abiding citizen. Imprisonment also sends a warning message to those potential lawbreakers that they will pay if they break the law. On the other hand, if the offence is not that serious, the penalty should be more diverse. For instance, pick-pockets are better made to pick up garbage in the communities for a year, instead of serving 1-month prison time. The community service is more helpful to get law-offenders involved among people and feel ashamed about their wrong-doings. Besides, by working for the community, they could gradually rebuild a sense of belonging, which might prevent them from breaking the law again. In conclusion, for those serious offenders, they should be sent to prison and for those with mild offence, they should be made to work.

解析     本题属于“立场选择型”作文,涉及的题材是“社会热点”。该题要求考生对“罪犯应被送进监狱还是送去劳改”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    开头:从法律的本意入题,指出罪行严重的犯罪人士须送往监狱,而那些情节不太严重的犯罪人士应送去劳改。
    主体:阐述原因。
    1.罪犯能在服刑期间通过反思而悔改,从而帮助他们改过,成为守法的社会公民。
    2.如果犯罪情节不严重,我们惩戒的方式可以多样化。举惩戒小偷为例。
    结尾:重申观点,情节严重的犯罪人士应送往监狱,而情节较轻的应送去劳改。
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