For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic on the Increasing Numbers of Travelers. You should

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic on the Increasing Numbers of Travelers. You should write at least 120 words based on the following table:
1. 2006年旅游人数比2005年有较大幅度增长
2. 分析旅游人数增长的原因

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答案 On the Increasing Numbers of Tourists As can be seen from the table, the year 2006 has witnessed a dramatic increase in the numbers of tourists compared with the result in 2005. In 2005, 11.02 million people chose to travel at home. But the figure is increased by 10% in 2006(12.12 million); and the number of tourists who visited abroad increase by 7.5% in 2006, with the figure of 3.12 million while it was only 2.88 in 2005. It is obvious from the table that people tend to spend more and more money and time on their entertainment during holidays. What contributed to this increase? To begin with, people has become richer than before and the living standard has risen up. They are able to afford money for traveling home and abroad. Secondly, as tourist business is playing a more important role in today’s GDP, the government has made great efforts to promote and develop tourism. Besides, it’s an effective way for people at work in such a competitive society, to release their great press and to enjoy the beautiful nature and peace of mind for a short time. In conclusion, more and more people prefer to travel rather than stay at home to enjoy their holidays, and this increasing trend will last in the foreseeable future.

解析     该题目属于“图表分析型”作文。针对此类作文,考生首先应简要描述图表所提供的信息,然后对信息进行归纳总结,分析图表所反映出现象的原因,最后得出结论并对这一现象的发展趋势加以预测。
图表分析型仿写模式:
    It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of…has undergone dramatic changes in the past few years.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in(时间)… compared with that in(时间)…
    What is the reason for such changes? Mainly there are(多少)…reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,(第一个原因)….Secondly,(第二个原因)…Thirdly,(第三个原因)….Finally,(第四个原因)….
    From the above analysis,we might say that the trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time.
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