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  3. Write a letter to the Office of Safety Management of your school to give your advice on how to improve school security. You

Write a letter to the Office of Safety Management of your school to give your advice on how to improve school security. You

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问题     Write a letter to the Office of Safety Management of your school to give your advice on how to improve school security.
    You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
    Do not use your own name. Use "Id Ming" instead.
    Do not write your address. (10 points)
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答案 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to suggest some ways to improve our school security. In view of the recent reports about several slips on rainy nights, I advise that all the broken road lights be repaired as soon as possible. Concerning the same accidents, some roads on our campus, the surfaces of which are already bumpy enough, urgently need fixing. As winter is coming, students may use some high power-consumption electric appliances in their dormitories, which may give rise to serious hidden danger. In my opinion, the Office of Safety Management has the responsibility to remind the students of dorm safety as a necessary prevention measure. I would appreciate it very much if you would consider my suggestions. Best regards, Li Ming
解析     题目要求以“李明”的名义写一封建议信。建议信一般可分为三部分：自我介绍，说明写信目的；委婉地提出建议或改进措施；礼貌期盼意见能得到采纳或回复。据此思路，结合题目给出的“校园安全的主题”，行文思路如下：首段点明写信目的：为校园安全提建议；第二、第三段具体陈述建议内容；第四段表达希望对方采纳建议的愿望。
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