In order to control the population, China has been on the policy of birth control for many years. However, presently many people

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问题     In order to control the population, China has been on the policy of birth control for many years. However, presently many people are worrying about the aging of population. What kind of problems in your opinion may the aging of population bring to us?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    Problems Caused by the Aging of Chinese Population

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答案 Problems Caused by the Aging of Chinese Population The aging of population can be seen from the increase in the population’s mean ages, which means the decline of the proportion of the population of children. As regards for China, citizens over 60 will rise to 31 percent of the whole population by 2050. The problems caused by the aging of population in our country are very serious. The problems of the aging of population are mainly manifested in two aspects. Aging has brought serious challenges to our country, such as the shortage of manpower and the weakened defense power. In my view, for China, a developing country, the biggest problem is the financial burden. China has entered the aging society long before achieving the goal of building an overall well-off society. To give the elderly a safe and comfortable life, the country’s old-age security system, medical insurance system and pension system should be increasingly improved, which means a huge sum of money. Secondly, the aging population might also be the challenge to individuals and families. The filial children have to spare a large portion of energy and time to support their parents, which will inevitably increase their burden and stress. The impious children can choose to live freely, but leave their parents in the misery. The aging population has become a huge threat to the economic development and the improvement of people’s living standards, so it is important for China to cope with the aging problem in advance.

解析     本题属于给定观点型题目,要求考生就人口老龄化这一问题进行阐述。中国一直都是人口大国,而丰富的劳动力资源也曾对我国的经济发展起到过重要的作用,但是现在中国即将面对的是严重的人口老龄化现象,人口老龄化会给中国带来什么样的问题,本文要求考生提出自己的观点和看法。我们可以从以下三方面着手,对人口老龄化问题进行探讨:
    现象阐述:因科学的发达、社会的进步等多种因素的作用,人的寿命日益延长,使到达老年期的人数在总人口中的比重逐渐增加。而中国到2050年总人口中超过六十岁的人将占到三成以上,人口老龄化问题会十分严重。
    问题阐述:
    1.人口老龄化可能带来劳动力短缺、国防兵源不足、用于老人退休、养老的费用增加、社会负担加重等各种问题。
    2.对于个人,特别是老年人而言,他们可能会面临更孤单、更困难的生活。
    3.人口老龄化对经济发展和劳动生产率的提高产生一定的消极影响。
    4.人口老龄化必然会引起家庭规模和家庭结构的变化,使家庭的养老功能不断削弱。
    提出建议:就中国而言,人口老龄化将给社会和经济发展带来巨大的挑战,所以应尽早完善各种体系,做好应对措施。
    范文主要通过现象阐述,结合问题阐述1和2,并提出建议的方法进行写作。
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