For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay in honor of teachers on the occasion of Teacher’s Day. You shou

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay in honor of teachers on the occasion of Teacher’s Day. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
    1.向老师致以节日祝贺
    2.从一件难忘的事回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献
    3.我如何回报老师的关爱

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答案 Teacher’s Day Teacher’s Day is the day for every student to convey his heartfelt gratitude to the teachers, who have devoted most of their time and energy to their students. Happy Teacher’s Day! My college English teacher has left the deepest impression on me. When I entered the college, English was a nightmare for me. I couldn’t follow the teacher and I almost decided to give up. My English teacher, thoughtful and considerate, noticed my depression and discouragement. After class she came up to me and talked with me for a long time. I still remember what she told me that day, "Nothing is easy and nothing is impossible, but if you persist you will succeed." From then on, she helped me with all her efforts and patience. It is she, on the long journey of my English learning, who has guided me and encouraged me. I would never forget my college English teacher. The best way for me to show my sincere love and respect to her is to do my utmost to study and make great contributions to our society.

解析     第一段引出文章的主题,在教师节来临之际对老师表示衷心的感谢。使用who引导的定语从句增加了句子的层次感。
    第二段叙述英语老师在英语学习方面给予自己的耐心帮助和无私教诲。利用表示时间顺序的词When…After…From then on…连接整个事件,脉络清晰。
    第三段有感而发,只有努力学习、为社会多做贡献才是回报老师的最好做法。本段末句中的不定式结构to show my sincere love and respect作状语,和第一句简单句结合,使段落错落有致。
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