Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawings. In you should: 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) inte

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问题     Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawings. In you should:
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) interpret the phenomenon reflected by it, and then
    3) give your comments.
    You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

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答案 Remarkable Progress in Environmental Improvement [1] In the picture, two men are talking about the straw-fired cogeneration plant and the sewage treatment plant in the distance. From the smile on their faces, we know they feel excited to see the environment improved, [2] with the sky bluer and the water cleaner.[3] Obviously; what the picture reflects is that we have made notable progress in environmental treatment. [4] There are many reasons explaining the achievement. [5] Firstly, it should be attributed to the enforcement of the pollution control regulations and laws. [5]In addition, the ever-increasing GDP provides funding for the great deeds. [5] Last but not least, people’s growing awareness of environmental protection plays a pushing role. [6]Regarding the above analysis, I have several suggestions to make. [7] On the one hand, our government should keep on strengthening legislations to protect our environment and never repeat the approach of polluting before administering. [8] On the other hand, our ordinary people should join hands to make concerted efforts. [9] Only in this way, can the project of environmental protection be carried on.

解析     本文为提纲式文字命题。图中的两人正在讨论着远处的秸秆发电厂和污水处理厂。由图片右下方的“实现天蓝水清”可知,图片实质上反映的是环境治理取得的巨大进步。
    套用现象解释型作文的行文思路,本文可作如下安排:第一段描述图画,并揭示环境治理取得了巨大进步这一现象;第二段分析该现象产生的三点原因:环境治理法规的强制实施、经济的增长为环境治理提供了资金、人们环保意识的加强;最后一段发表自己的看法,并提出两方面的建议。
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