In recent years, more and more college students have been working in their spare time. Some people think it affects students’ st

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问题   In recent years, more and more college students have been working in their spare time. Some people think it affects students’ study; also many argue that it can improve their competence. What’s your opinion? Write an essay of about 400 words on the topic. You should supply a title for your article.
   In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 The Advantages and Disadvantages of Students’ Part-time Working Nowadays, it is rather fashionable for College students to take part-time jobs. They work in their spare time in restaurant, bars, or at some children’s home as a tutor. On this phenomenon, different people hold different viewpoints. Some people think after-school work is beneficial to the students. It can cultivate independence in young people. But on the other hand, they spend more money than they have made. They not only waste time, but also neglect their studies. So at last, they will do nothing at all. As for me, I think college students’ making money has its advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it does help students in many aspects. Firstly, In China, the parents always take care of everything for their children until they get married, which makes the young too dependent. Making money through their efforts helps them know the value of labor so that they can be more dependent, more confident and more economically minded. Secondly, that they earn money by themselves makes them realize how difficult their parents support their study and then they will be more grateful to their parents and work harder than before. Thirdly, making money off campus helps them get more social experience and realize what the society is really like, which is good for them to get a better job and grasp the communicating skills. The college students had better get more abilities besides study as possible as they can in order to work better in future job. Nowadays, society demands that the college students should not only get a good communicating skills and languages fluency. However, the main task of students is to study hard and learn what is needed for the development of our society. Though students who have part-time jobs may relieve their parents’ economic burdens, their early contact with society adds greatly worries to their parents. Furthermore, working off campus takes a lot of time from study. During college years, especially for language students, basic knowledge skills need great part of practice. Working more outside means studying less at school. No time means no practice, which leads to no skills. Making a little money at cost of neglecting study is not wise. What’s more, it is also easy for students to turn from knowledge learning to money pursuing. In a word, there are more advantages than disadvantages. But, to us students, study is the most important task. Having finished study, we can work as some part-time job. Thus, the more important thing is to keep the balance between study and work. If we can deal with it well, we can benefit a lot from it.

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