For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Self-confidence Leads to Success. You should write at

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Self-confidence Leads to Success. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.在当今激烈的社会竞争中,自信是成功的基石
    2.我们要培养自己的信心,做有自信的人

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答案 Self-confidence Leads to Success There are many factors that can contribute to a person’s success in his life. Whether he is at school or at work, a person is more likely to succeed if he is honest, diligent, and responsible. But of all the possible characteristics that can affect one’s success, I believe self-confidence to be the most important one for the following reasons. The first reason is that when a person has self-confidence it gives him the courage to try new things. Another reason is that a confident person rarely gives up when he is confronted with difficulties. Finally, confident people are not afraid to show off their achievements. That does not mean that they should brag, but that they can accept the compliments of others gracefully and confidently. When their achievements are more recognized by others, they are likely to gain greater success. In short. I believe self-confidence to be the most important factor in success. It enables people to take risks, try again when they fail, and enjoy their accomplishments when they win. With these abilities, a confident person can get more chances to achieve success. Thus we should try our best to build up self-confidence.

解析     第一段指出成功的因素有很多,但是拥有自信是其中最重要的。末句使用believe…to be,类似的表达还有consider...to be等。例如:The government considers reforming medical care tobe a priority.(政府把进行医疗改革当作第一要务。)
    第二段从三个方面阐述自信的重要性:首先,有自信才有尝试的勇气;其次,有自信的人在面对困难时不会轻易放弃;最后,有自信的人勇于展示自己的成就,大方接受别人的称赞,这样更有利于成功。
    第三段给出自己的观点:自信让人勇于承担、不怕挫折、享受成就,所以我们应该努力培养自信心。
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