For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Persisting or Giving Up. You should write at least 150

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Persisting or Giving Up. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.有人认为坚持不懈,永不放弃的品格最可贵
    2.有人认为善于选择,适时放弃最重要
    3.我的观点

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答案 Persisting or Giving Up Nowadays, every individual makes an endeavor to pursue a higher living standard, and in the process, it’s inevitable to be confronted with some crossings. Thus persisting or giving up is a common dilemma we meet in our daily life. Some people put a high value on perseverance. It is self-evident that perseverance contributes to success. So they hold that if you feel like victory, you are supposed to be persistent in what you are clinging to. However, there are people who pay more attention to being capable of making a choice and giving up in due course. From their perspective, opportunities will disappear in a blink and it’s a waste of time if you still stick to what seems to be hopeless. As I see it, both are of vital significance. We should persevere in what we have chosen and give up what is unrealistic. Only in this way can we cultivate an aggressive and rational character and achieve a bright future.

解析     第一段指出在人生的十字路口上,选择坚持还是放弃成为一个难题。
    第二段前半部分阐述有些人赞成坚持不懈,他们认为只有坚持才能成功。后半部分阐述另一些人认为要适时放弃,对他们而言,善于选择更加重要,发现自己追求的目标不现实时应该及时放弃。第三句为多重复合句,其中主句中包含that引导的宾语从句,而宾语从句中又包含if引导的条件状语从句。
    第三段表明自己的观点,即确定好目标后就要认真坚持,努力去实现。但是,一旦发现目标不切实际,则应及时放弃。末句为Only引导的倒装句式。
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