For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Urban Waterlogging (内涝) following the outline given

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Urban Waterlogging (内涝) following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
1.如今不少大城市一下暴雨就出现城市内涝的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
                        On Urban Waterlogging

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答案 In recent years, we can see news headlines like "XX city suffers greatly from waterlogging after a rainstorm" from time to time. These events make us wonder why our so-called international modern cities are so weak in front of a common rainstorm. Should all the blame falls onto the extreme weather? The answer is definitely no. We are now suffering the consequence of our own actions. On the one hand, the acceleration of urbanization squeezes the green area to the largest extent. In addition, the endless construction works damage the water drainage system. On the other hand, the current water drainage systems in most cities are outdated and do not keep up with the city planning. Generally, local authorities tend to put more emphasis on above-ground constructions over underground ones, as the former are achievements much more easily to be seen. The drainage system somehow reflects one city’s level of civilization. It is urgent for local governments to prioritize the construction of drainage systems, and reinforce the supervision and the maintenance of related facilities.

解析     这篇现象分析型作文要求考生根据提纲就“城市内涝”展开论述。根据题目要求,文章结构可安排如下:
    第一段首先表示大城市一遇暴雨就出现内涝的现象屡见不鲜,接着提出思考:这该怪罪极端的天气吗?
    第二段承接上文,否定怪罪天气的看法。并指出我们现在是自食其果:一方面城市化的快速发展减少绿化的空间,建筑项目破坏排水系统:另一方面地方政府在城市规划时不重视排水系统的建设。
    第三段提出自己的看法和建议:地方政府应重视排水系统的建设,加强相关设施的监督和维护。
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