For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Occupying Seats on Campus. You should write at least 1

admin2015-09-14  29

问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Occupying Seats on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.大学里“占座”现象十分普遍
    2.分析这种现象带来的影响
    3.我的观点

选项

答案 Occupying Seats on Campus Nowadays, it is common to see a textbook, a notebook or even a piece of paper on the desk in the classroom or library, indicating that the seat has been occupied. And strangely enough, most students seem to take it for granted. Although for most students, occupying seats is for the sake of study, it still has brought some negative effects. For one thing, occupying seats violates the rule of fairness. Some students can not find a seat, even if they come to the classroom early. As a result, they tend to feel disappointed at college life. For another, occupying seats is a kind of selfish behavior. With a reserved seat, no matter how late one comes to the classroom, the seat is still kept for him. Therefore, students who are used to occupying seats may become insensitive, never concerning themselves about others’ feelings. Considering what has been mentioned above, I think it is high time that we college students should reconsider our behavior. As long as we improve our consciousness, it will not be difficult to get rid of the habit of occupying seats.

解析     第一段提出当前大学校园中普遍存在的“占座”现象,而且大部分学生已经对此习以为常。首句使用动词的现在分词短语作伴随状语,展现作者的语言运用能力。
    第二段从两个方面分析“占座”现象带来的影响。一方面,虽然“占座”是为了学习,但这却违背了公平原则,挫伤了许多学生的学习积极性;另一方面,“占座”行为也助长了部分学生的自私和麻木心理,不顾及他人的感受。末句中使用了who引导的定语从句,并用现在分词短语作伴随状语,也是一个亮点句子结构。
    第三段提出自己的看法:大学生应该重新审视“占座”的习惯,增强意识,摒弃这种不合理的行为。首句使用了It is high time that…这一高分句型。
转载请注明原文地址:https://kaotiyun.com/show/mlQ7777K
0

最新回复(0)