Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1)interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments

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问题     Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
    1)interpret the chart, and
    2)give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.(15 points)
   

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答案 As is clearly reflected in the above pie chart, the purposes of students traveling differ greatly in one Chinese college. 37% of students choose to travel because they want to appreciate different sceneries. Meanwhile, there are 33% students think they need traveling as a means to release pressure. What’s more, 9% say they want to make new friends in tour, while 6% hope to cultivate the ability of independence. There are several factors that can account for this situation. To mention just a few, first, many college students want to broaden their horizons, to enrich their experience, to see the colorful world, and to go to the places where they have never been. So, seeing different sceneries is the reason that takes the largest part. Second, there are more advertisement in the information age, people are attracted by the sightseeing places in the commercials. Last, it is sure enough that college life are full of pressure and responsibilities, therefore, many of them regard travel as a way of relax or as a way to separate from the depressed reality temporarily. Generally speaking, various ways of traveling stimulate the dramatic change of traditional notions. This is a subtle phenomenon that we cannot neglect, because it can have a great impact on college students’ future development.

解析     本题为饼状图表作文,考生的主要任务是分析该现象背后的原因。考生应该以三段论的模式构建全文。第一段要描述出图表中欣赏风景、缓解压力、结交朋友以及培养独立能力在某高校学生的旅行目的中所占的比例。第二段对其背后的原因进行深入分析,该段也是文章的核心段落。其中,重点要分析欣赏风景和缓解压力这两方面的主要原因。在最后一段中,考生应对整个现象进行总评并得出结论。饼状图在最近两年的考研英语(二)的考试中连续考到,值得广大考生关注。
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