1. 有很多人喜欢养宠物 2.养宠物的利与弊 3.你的建议

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问题     1. 有很多人喜欢养宠物
    2.养宠物的利与弊
    3.你的建议

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答案 The Advantages and Disadvantages of Keeping Pets [1]Nowadays many people like raising pets,such as dogs,cats,birds,etc.[2]Actually,it is good to keep pets because pets can play with the young and accompany the old.[3]Research also shows that living with a pet helps to soothe people’s pressure and distress and even decreases the possibility of getting heart diseases. [4]However,many are against living together with animals.They argue that pets are easily infected by diseases,[5]which may pass on to humans.[6]What’s more,the unpleasant smell and waste caused by pets are a resource of environmental pollution. [7]In my opinion,keeping pets brings joy to our life. [8]But to avoid potential risks and troubles,we have to make sure that our pets are properly vaccinated and their behaviors are under control.

解析 [1]提出社会现象,对应提纲中的第1点。raise和keep同义,使说法多样化。
[2]指出养宠物的益处。accompany“陪伴”是亮点词汇。注意the young,the old这样的地道表达。
[3]用研究结果说明养宠物的其他益处,增强了说服力。soothe是亮点词汇,表示缓解(压力),抚平(创伤)等义。
[4]用However转折至弊端,逻辑清晰。这句话是该段的中心句。
[5]用which引导的定语从句是亮点。pass on to sb.“传给某人”。
[6]What’s more继续补充说明。
[7]用In my opinion指出自己的观点。
[8]结合上文提出建议。vaccinate“预防接种”,be under control“可控”。
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