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  3. You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "Competitions and Social Development". You should base your compositi

You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "Competitions and Social Development". You should base your compositi

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问题     You are to write in no less than 120 words about the title "Competitions and Social Development". You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
(1)竞争已成为现代社会的突出特征。
(2)竞争对于社会发展的积极作用。
(3)结论。
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答案 Competition has become a noticeable feature of modern society. Its influence，both helpful and harmful, on the social development is great. Generally speaking, competition brings prosperity to society. By giving reward to the high-achievers and eliminating the losers, the society can run more efficiently and in better order. Also, competition emphasizes the capability of the individuals regardless of their class background, wealth or power. As a result, competition not only promotes social mobility, but also strengthens the idea of equality of opportunity. But it cannot be denied that unfair competition is still prevalent in many sectors of our society. The exertion of the political power and parental influence turn out a big obstacle to further development. So, what is called for urgently now is a fair and open environment for competition. Only with that can our country achieve faster progress and generate more prosperity in the international competition.
解析     文章开篇用一句话确立了全文立论的主题——竞争对社会发展既有好处又有坏处。第二段、第三段分别扣住“好处”和“坏处”这两个关键词展开论述，使文章具体而充实。本文表达准确，词汇丰富，句型富于变化，特别是通过运用各种关联词，使句子间衔接紧密，段落过渡自然。
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