Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) describe the diagram, and 2) give your comments.

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问题     Write an essay based on the chart.
    In your writing, you should
    1)  describe the diagram, and
    2)  give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.
   

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答案 The pie chart shows to what extent college graduates are satisfied with their jobs. As can be seen, half of the respondents are not satisfied with their jobs. A further 12% of the graduates are very dissatisfied with their jobs, thinking of which as absolutely not the ones they want. On the other hand, 28% of the graduates find their jobs rather satisfying and another 10% say that they are very satisfied, because they are doing exactly what they want to do. The survey results reveal the unsatisfactory attitude of college graduates towards their jobs. Why does the unsatisfactory rate stand at this alarmingly high level? Probably, students have not been fully prepared during their university life. Many students harbor the preconception that a u-niversity degree will immediately guarantee a decent job. Unfortunately, this rosy dream is no longer the case. Therefore, students are advised to take some social practice when they are in college, and try to come to terms with the reality via some hands-on experience.

解析 该图表显示了大学毕业生就业满意度的情况。从图表可见,过半数大学生对自己的就业情况不太满意。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:第一段分别描述图表中的四个数据。第二段提出个人看法:不满意的原因在于大学生认为大学文凭能帮他们找到好工作。结果发现事与愿违。建议大学生多参加社会实践,以更好地适应社会。
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