Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
    1. describe the drawing briefly,
    2. interpret its intended meaning, and then
    3. give your comments.
    You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
   

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答案 What is drawn in the picture is not unfamiliar to many people. A little boy is complaining to his mother that he wants to quit roller-skating and painting and to learn to play the piano instead, with his roller-skating shoes and drawing board dropped on the floor. This picture indicates a perpetual topic—strong will and perseverance, the purpose of which is to educate young people to keep interests in certain areas, for changing hobbies constantly may eventually leave one with ho specialty at all. On the surface, strong will and perseverance may seem not to be interlinked. Nevertheless, they are, indeed, closely related to each other, particularly when you are making the necessary efforts in face of discouragement, fear, and distress. You need strong will to get you started, but after the passion has died down, that’s when you need perseverance to pull you through. Cultivating any new skill, such as playing a musical instrument , learning a foreign language, and mastering a particular sport or game, is precisely so. In my opinion, lots of actions can be taken to foster children’s strong will and perseverance. Firstly, realistic goals and expectations for children should be set. More importantly, parents should set good examples. All in all, young people should learn to develop their strong will and perseverance at a young age in order to gain success in the future.

解析     图画涉及三大元素——人、物以及说明文字,考生可从人物的动作、事物的状态入手,并结合文字内容展开分析,从而判断图画的寓意。图中文字表明,男孩之前学过轮滑和绘画,但是半途而废,转而对钢琴产生了兴趣;而图中的妈妈只是看着自己的儿子,含笑不语;右下角还未来得及整理的轮滑鞋和画具,象征着刚刚被男孩放弃的兴趣爱好。综合这些信息可得出的结论是:男孩做事缺少毅力和恒心,从而引出“毅力与恒心”这一主题。图画信息延展空间较大,考生在写作时需谨慎对待,避免将主题引向讨论父母对孩子的教育问题。
    第一段:描述图画。小男孩对妈妈说的话以及丢弃的轮滑鞋和画具与图画寓意息息相关,应着重体现这两点信息。
    第二段:揭示寓意,深入分析。首先可点明主题,然后结合生活实例,从正面或反面论证主题——培养毅力与恒心的必要性和重要性。
    第三段:总结评论。就培养孩子的毅力与恒心提出建议。
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