Should late childbirth be encouraged? The following are the supporters’ and opponents’ opinions. Read carefully the opinions fro

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问题     Should late childbirth be encouraged? The following are the supporters’ and opponents’ opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and then give your view on the issue.
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    Yes:
    Being ready to be parents makes better mothers and fathers, because they would devote more time and energy to their family than their younger counterparts.
    After years of waiting for a baby to come, mature parents are more likely to deliver quality family education to their children.
    Another advantage of becoming parents late is financial security, which is deemed to exert a positive influence on child raising. In terms of reproduction, more and more women are concentrating their efforts on their own career development so that they can invest more in their children.
    No:
    If women decide to have their babies late in life, they may have to face some pregnancy problems such as low fertility, high risk of diseases and genetic disorder. As fertility declines with age, delaying pregnancy also means that many couples may experience this difficulty.
    Couples having kids later in their life are not only confronted with health challenges, but also have to deal with their retirement life as their children are not old enough or don’t have the ability to support them.
    From a social perspective, late childbirth may decrease the birth rate and cause a labor shortage in the near future.

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答案 My View on Late Childbirth In today’s society, many young couples tend to delay having their babies so that they can get well prepared, both psychologically and financially. However, late childbirth is discouraged by some people due to its negative effects on individuals, families and even the society. For instance, older couples may not only suffer from infertility when they intend to have a child but also face severe problems in their life after retirement. Meanwhile, the decrease in population will result in a labor shortage. From my perspective, couples can choose to have their kids either at an early age or later in their life, as long as they are ready for this big switch. On the one hand, children do require lots of parental care. Couples should be well prepared to settle down and focus their attention on the enjoyment of being parents. On the other hand, in addition to the necessary living and educational expenses, most parents nowadays pay for promoting the intellectual development of their children. Without adequate savings, many families may experience the hardship of economic insecurity. To sum up, currently two different trends of childbearing have appeared, both of which have an everlasting impact on social development and children’s growth.

解析     本题讨论的是人们是否应该晚育。在具体行文方面,考生应首先概述正反双方的观点。然后给出自己的观点:只要做好了准备,人们既可以选择早育,也可以选择晚育。最后总结全文。
    开头部分阐述背景并概述正反双方的观点。正方观点:现在,许多年轻夫妇倾向于晚育,这样他们就能在心理上和经济上都做好准备。反方观点:由于晚育对个人、家庭,甚至社会都会造成负面影响,一些人不鼓励晚育。
    中间部分通过“From my perspective…”阐述自己的观点:只要做好了准备,人们既可以选择早育也可以选择晚育。并用“On the one hand…”和“On the other hand…”阐述理由:孩子确实需要家长付出大量的关爱,夫妻应该做好准备稳定下来,专心享受做父母的乐趣;除了必要的生活费和教育费,如今大多数家长还会支付一大笔钱来促进孩子的智力发展,如果没有足够的存款,许多家庭将会陷入经济困境。
    结尾部分通过“To sum up…”总结全文,重申观点。
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