Write a composition of about 120 words on the topic "Should Private Cars be Encouraged in China". You may refer to the following

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问题    Write a composition of about 120 words on the topic "Should Private Cars be Encouraged in China". You may refer to the following points:
   (1)In China, there are more and more privately-owned cars;
   (2)Some support owning cars privately and others object it;
   (3)Draw a natural conclusion to your composition.

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答案 China Shouldn’t Encourage Privately-Owned Cars With the development of modern society, more and more Chinese families can afford to buy cars. We can’t deny the conveniences brought by ears, but with all things considered, I think China shouldn’t encourage privately-owned automobiles. To begin with, cars may take up much time and space. China has a large population and the average space for each person is limited. If everyone has his or her own car, the traffic problem will be more serious and people will have to wait for more time on their way to work or home. With the space crammed with cars, people will have less space for walking or jogging. What’s more, it is well-known that cars cause pollution which do great harm to people’s health and even threatens our living environment. If each person has a private car, the fumes emitted by the cars will make the whole world an inhospitable place to live in. Therefore, the government shouldn’t encourage privately-owned cars. Otherwise, there would be a more crowded society and more hostile environment awaiting us in the future.

解析    (ⅰ)这是给出了主题和段落提纲的提纲式作文。在运用提纲式作文的写作方法外还应注意,所给主题是—个问句,不能用作标题,应根据自己的观点选用确定的陈述句标题。
   (ⅱ)所给提纲实际上是规定了每个段落的主旨,考生将段落主旨扩充成段落正文即可。
   (ⅲ)综合运用论述方法和表达结构,注意语言的规范性、段落与句子之间的连贯性,得出自己的结论要自然、合乎逻辑。
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