For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students Complaints. You should write at least 120

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students Complaints. You should write at least 120 words based on the outline given below:
1. 学生对很多事抱怨不已(对家长、学校、社会……)
2.学生和老师对此看法不同
3.你的观点

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答案 Students’ Complaints Nowadays, we can hear many complaints from students at schools and universities. They complain about their parents for not giving a better family background to them; they complain about their teachers and school administrators for being too strict with them; they complain about the society for the pressure they may face after graduation when hunting jobs, seeking social status, and getting their payments. They have so many complaints that sometimes they may have pessimistic views towards the society. Different people have different ideas about students’ complaints. To the students, they regard them as a route leading to democracy. They believe that they are entitled to them, since the society should listen to them. They have their own requirements and needs. They are no longer the babies in their parents’ eyes and the robots in their teachers’ hands. They are independent beings. On the other hand, the complaints are not useful and beneficial to their life, according to their teachers. Teachers feel that the students are no longer as tame as before. They are wasting so much time complaining instead of contributing to the society. The students ask for more from the society, but they refuse to sacrifice for the society. As for me, I believe that students should pay more attention to their studies, and should take their responsibility for the society. We shoulder the historic mission to build our country stronger, and complaints alone can riot fulfill this.

解析     该题目属于“现象议论型”作文。针对此类作文,考生可以根据提纲内容,先揭示某种现象,然后论述各方的观点,再发表自己的见解。
现象议论型仿写模式:
    Nowadays,more and more students are always complaining about(指出现象)…They complain about…,and about(展开讨论)…
    Different people have different ideas about (对这个现象的不同看法)....  To the students, (学生的观点).... On the other hand, the teachers think that (老师的观点)....
    As for me, I believe that (我的观点)....
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