Study the following graph carefully and write an essay on the topic Private Car Ownership in China Increased Rapidly. You should

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问题    Study the following graph carefully and write an essay on the topic Private Car Ownership in China Increased Rapidly. You should:
   (1) describe the graph,
   (2)account for the implied meaning, and
   (3)state your view.
   You should write about 120 words and make full reference to the graph.

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答案 Private Car Ownership in China Increased Rapidly As is shown in the graph, the number of private car ownership in China increased approximately six times from more than 2 million in 1994 to over 13 million in 2004, which is a blessing as well as a curse. To begin with, the graph implies that China has been developing rapidly since 1990s and Chinese have become more wealthy. But it also means a heavy burden on our urban traffic because those increased cars demand more roads and more efficient administration. In addition, it means more problems to the quality of our urban living: more waste gas discharge, noise and fatalities in traffic accidents. The rapid increase of private cars also poses a great challenge to our energy section, especially when energy is in short supply all over the world and the oil price keeps climbing. In my view, measures should be taken to control the rapid growth of private cars. Firstly, we should popularize private cars. Secondly, public transportation should be given priority. Only in these ways can we enjoy the convenience brought about by modern civilization.

解析    (ⅰ)这是提纲与图表结合的作文,阐释图表时重点注意的是图表所揭示的发展、变化等的趋势及与自己想表达的主题有关的数据和材料,不要过于细致。
   (ⅱ)写作时注意应包括提纲所给的所有要点。如果提纲是中文,切忌逐字翻译;如果提纲是英文,不能将其原封不动地照搬。
   (ⅲ)考生应根据图表和提示先写出每一个段落的主题句,然后扩展成段,再完成全文。
   (ⅳ)注意语言的规范性和逻辑上的严密性。
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