Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific

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问题     Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. Write an essay of about 400 words. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.
    In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 The Benefits of Working for a Small Company One of the most controversial issues today relates to whether working in a large or a small company is a better option. From my everyday experience and observation, I believe that a small corporation offers more opportunities to their employees than a big one. In this essay, I will give some examples to support my opinion. The most important benefit of working for a small company is that I will have many chances to develop. In general, a small company is a developing enterprise and it is not easy to absorb many excellent employees. If I enter this small company, I think that the boss will appreciate me and give me many opportunities to reveal my abilities. On contrary to this, a large company is already a highly-developed institution. There are many prominent talents working for it. A good position will absorb hundreds of candidates, which means that I have to spend a lot of time and vigor to get this position. Another benefit of working for a small company, which working for a large company almost cannot achieve, is that I can learn many practical skills. As shown above, a small company is a developing enterprise. This means that it has not a great deal of money to employ many persons. Consequently, I can do all kinds of jobs at the same time. I think that this will be useful to compete in the society. But in a large company, I may only engage a monotonous job over a long period of time. I believe that this will be helpless to improve my capacity. What’s more, there will be more fun finding myself in a small company because of closer interactive relationships. Colleagues can readily become friends, the team spirit being high. In fact, it may not be a big thing but many small things, like birthdays being remembered, or going as far as calling the boss by first name. Of course, choosing to work for a large company also has advantages to some extent. For example, it will afford handsome salary and will be not easy to fail in business competition. But from my own development, I still want to work in a small company. In addition, I believe that every large company originates from a small company. Maybe I will become an important person when the small company in which I work becomes a large one.

解析     本文语言简洁流畅,结构清晰。在第一段中,作者非常明确地亮出了自己的观点,同时强调这是他个人经历和观察所得出的结论,这样不仅与题目中Which would you prefer?相符合,也使得整篇文章给人留下表述严谨的第一印象。在论证部分,作者提出了三点理由,首先,在小公司会有更多的发展机会;其次,在小公司能学到更多的技能;最后,在小公司同事之间的关系会更亲密。这三个理由从三个不同方面给作者的观点提供支持,让人信服。值得注意的是,在论证部分,作者在第二段和第三段分析完小公司的优点后马上使用对比论证的方法,提出了在这方面大公司的缺陷,这种对比论证凸显了小公司的优势和大公司的不足,增强了全文的说服力。最后,在全文的结尾部分,作者在总结之前先承认了在大公司工作的好处,这些好处是显而易见的,也是大家都承认的,这一让步写法使全文的论述更加完整,也使全文看上去更具客观性。
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