Care for the elderly should focus on their psychological needs, the elderly are eager to be respected again, they want to contin

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问题 Care for the elderly should focus on their psychological needs, the elderly are eager to be respected again, they want to continue to make contributions to society, and to realize their abundant life value.

选项 A、choppy
B、comma splice
C、fragment
D、correct

答案B

解析 改成…psychological needs because they are eager to be respected again to continue to make contributions to society and to realize their abundant life value. 其中are eager to be respected again表示要关注老年人的心理需求,这一句是提出的观点。之后的内容具体阐述老年人的心理需求,即受尊重、贡献社会、发挥剩余价值。所以题干应该是两句话,使用逗号隔开两个成分完整的句子,属于逗号叠加错误。首先应正确分隔句子,然后用恰当的连词和形式修改句子。
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