A freshman, Jean, who is your friend, wants to get some advice from you about how to live a meaningful life in university. You s

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问题     A freshman, Jean, who is your friend, wants to get some advice from you about how to live a meaningful life in university. You should write a letter to her to offer your suggestions. In the letter, you should
    1) give your advice to her, and
    2) encourage her in her future study.
    You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.
    Do not write the address.

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答案Dear Jean, I have heard that you have got some problems in your university life.It is my pleasure to give you some suggestions. From my point of view,the university life is really cool and colorful.It is also very crucial to your job-hunting and a happy life after graduation.So you should take advantage of it.First of all,you should focus on your major and take as many lectures as possible so that you can learn professional knowledge for your future job.Besides,universities usually have excellent libraries which have plenty of books.You can make full use of the library in your university to read various books to broaden your horizon. In a word,for a better lire in the future,you should value the days in campus and spend time on more positive events.In this way,I think you are sure to get a colorful and meaningful university life. Yours, Li Ming

解析     从本题所给信息可以看出,这里要求考生写一封建议信。本文是写给自己的好友Jean,信中要给她提供一些如何使大学生活更加多姿多彩且有意义的建议,同时鼓励她要对未来充满信心。
    通常这类信可分为三部分:1.点题,说明要给予建议。2.具体说明建议有哪些。3.说明这样做的好处并给予鼓励。本文根据提纲要求分三段写即可。本题给出的信息是:写信的对象(your friend,Jean),写信的原因(give some advice on how to live a meaningful university life)。信件的内容要求(give two or three suggestions)。
    此信为典型的建议信模式,即说明写信缘由——对方所提到或涉及的问题;阐述个人观点——提供具体建议;希望建议可供对方参考或采纳。由于此信是写给自己的好朋友,所以信件称呼明确写Dear Jean。
    第一段开门见山说明写信是为了给好朋友提供一些大学生活的建议,言简意赅。第二段具体阐述自己的建议,主要是多学习知识。层次分明,思路清晰。第三段自然地表达了自己的期望——希望好朋友能够采纳建议,重拾信心。信函的结尾处使用了常规签名方式。
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