For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Private Schools in City X. Your essay should start with a b

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Private Schools in City X. Your essay should start with a brief description of the chart. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 Private Schools in City X According to the chart, it is clear that the number of private schools in city X has had a tremendous growth since 2001. But the degree of satisfaction to private schools in these years is decreasing gradually. There are mainly three reasons accounting for this phenomenon. Firstly, the government has adopted positive education policies to encourage the development of private schools. Secondly. private schools are usually better equipped with superior teaching facilities and have more comfortable living and learning environments. Thirdly, private schools have greater flexibility in adjusting curriculum design. These advantages attract many students. Money, however, does not guarantee high-quality education. Sound guidelines are essential to the successful administration of private schools. Most students of private schools are from rather wealthy families. If not well directed and properly disciplined, these privileged young people may turn out to be new aristocrats, unable to bear hardship and survive the fierce competition in modern society.

解析     第一段简要指出柱状图中两个系列的变化趋势:私立学校数量增多,但公众对其满意度下降。
    第二段从三个方面分析私立学校兴起的原因:第一,政府采取相应政策鼓励私立学校的发展;第二,私立学校通常教学设备先进,学生学习和住宿条件也比较优越;第三,私立学校可以随时根据具体情况调节课程设置,学生选择弹性大。
    第三段指出金钱不是万能的,如果缺乏适当的监督管理,教育质量必定会下降,因此,应该加大监管力度,使私立学校中家庭条件优越的学生能够经受得起挫折和竞争。末句是主从复合句,If引导的条件状语从句中省略了主语和系动词,这是因为如果主、从句主语一致,从句谓语动词中又包含系动词be,则从句中的主语和be可以省略;同时,主句的宾语后,unable to bear hardshipand survive the fierce competition in modern society是形容词短语充当宾语补足语。
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