The road to an Olympic champion is full of thorns. Some athletes succeed after years of hard training while some fail in spite o

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问题    The road to an Olympic champion is full of thorns. Some athletes succeed after years of hard training while some fail in spite of years of great efforts. In your opinion, which attribute is more important for an Olympic champion, technique or mental strength?
    Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
   Technique or Mental Strength?
   You are to write in three parts:
   In the first part, state your position.
   In the second part, support your views with one or two reasons.
   In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 Technique or Mental strength? To be an Olympic champion must be the dream of every professional athlete. After a long time of great efforts, some succeed while others fail. In my opinion, to win a gold medal in Olympic games, mental strength is more important than technique. First, all athletes are human beings. Generally speaking, the physical strength of every normal human being is not diverse greatly, except that of patients, children and elders. So the techniques of competition which are mastered by the athletes are almost the same, especially after everyone has been trained for a long time. Secondly, one’s mental strength is difficult to get by training. Or we can say, it’s not easy to improve one’s mental strength with some exercises. This is a kind of thing which is somewhat innate. So it is not strange why there’re always old hands failing in the game while green hands succeeding out of the public’s expectation. Just because the former are under greater stress. When they don’t have enough metal strength to deal with the stress, they certainly will lose the game, no matter how skillful they are. So people should pay more attention to mental strength in selecting athletes as well as in training them.

解析 1.明确题目要求。本单元考题中的“Technique”,“Mental strength”是题目的关键词。同时考生需要明确这两种素质是针对奥运会运动员这一群体而言的。构思文章的时候,考生需要围绕这个群体的特点展开论述。
2.选择写作角度。本单元作文题目要求为:对于奥运会冠军而言,技术更重要还是精神力量更重要?不论是技术还是精神力量,对于奥运会冠军而言都是必不可少的,到底哪个比哪个更为重要呢?考生可以选择支持任一方面,只要能够论据充足,论证充分即可。
3.组织语言结构。专业四级作文考试要求学生能够正确、恰当地遣词造句,有效地成段,同时要求学生有效地提高篇章水平。
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