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  3. Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and

Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and

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问题     Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. Write an essay of about 400 words. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.
    In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
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答案 Advantages of Travelling with Another Person Traveling is a common hobby for people around the world these days. While there are some people who like to travel with a companion, there are other people who prefer to travel alone. There are definitely pros and cons associated with each preference. As for me, 1 prefer to travel with another person because sometimes traveling can be lonely, and it is also safer if I am traveling with a companion. One reason why I prefer to travel with one or more people is that sometimes traveling alone can make me feel lonely. However, if I am traveling with someone, I can ease that lonely feeling. For example, if I am touring around Europe, I might want to share that experience and talk about what I am looking at. If I am visiting a museum with a companion, we can discuss the art and share opinions about what we are seeing, but if I am alone, there will be no one to talk to. Traveling with a companion also makes eating, flying, shopping and other activities more interesting because sharing the experiences is part of the fun. Another reason is that traveling with a friend or in a group is much safer than traveling alone. For instance, what if I am hiking on a mountain alone in a foreign land and I get injured? If I am traveling alone, probably no one will come along to help me, but if I am traveling with a companion, that person can go for help. In addition, in every country there are thieves and other types of bad people that take advantage of tourists. Criminals would be more reluctant to bother two people traveling together than they would one person on their own. This is an especially important point for female travelers or for people traveling in an unstable environment. Sometimes, it is nice to travel alone and it is okay to do that, but if 1 had to choose between traveling alone and traveling with a companion, I would be most likely to choose traveling with a companion. I prefer that way because it is very lonely traveling alone with no one to talk to and it is safer to travel with a companion in case of an emergency.I am sure that most people would agree with those two points.
解析     本文句式丰富多样，长短句交替使用，虽用词简单，但表述十分到位。在主题句中，作者不仅表明了自己的态度，即主张和同伴一起旅游更有趣，也包含了正文中将要展开的两点理由，即独自一人旅游会比较寂寞，也不安全，这使得全文结构清晰明了。在正文展开部分，作者主要采用了举例沦证和对比论证两种论证方式。旅游的乐趣其实是一种主观感受，作者在主题句中也明确表示是自己本人比较喜欢和同伴一起旅游，因此，全文的例证部分基本上都是用了第一人称，如：What if I am hiking on a mountain alone in a foreign land and I get injured?此外，本文在多处采用了对比论证，将自己独自一人旅行和与同伴一起旅行进行对比，增加了全文的说服力。
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