For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on people’s seeking for happiness endlessly. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案 The More Lustful, the Unhappier In the picture, a patient is complaining to the doctor that the lust for endless happiness makes him only miserable. This picture demonstrates the widespread phenomenon that people nowadays are seeking happiness and fortune with an insatiable aim. In my opinion, the more lustful we are, the unhappier we will be. Happiness is a state of mind. When we are truly happy, our deep minds give us such psychological hints as we should enjoy the moment, seize the day and live to the fullest. That is to say, satisfaction is at the core of happiness. Instead of grumbling about the imperfect family, struggling for a promotion or even squabbling over life trifles, we should be content with what we are blessed with at the moment. Satisfaction means we can always perceive things from a favorable perspective and move forward with full gratitude. Only when the essence of happiness is fully understood can we truly enjoy an air of freedom, choosing to live the way we like. The endless lust for happiness, however, can only bring us a dreary commitment to meaningless ambitions.

解析     题目要求考生对图片信息进行描述并对人们无休无止追求幸福的现象进行评价。根据题目要求,文章的结构可安排如下:
    第一段:首先简要描述图片信息并揭示这是一种普遍的社会现象;其次陈述对这种现象的个人观点:欲望愈多,我们反倒愈不开心。
    第二段:由浅入深论述幸福的定义并引出幸福的内核:满足。只有心怀感恩、满足于当下,人们才能把握住幸福。并且陈述正确积极的人生态度。
    第三段:从正反两方面概括总结前文观点:满足才是幸福的内核,只有满足才能自由地享受幸福;而对幸福的无休止追求反倒会使人受困,迷失幸福的真谛。
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