More and more adult students are renting fiats to live away from campus, and some of them are student lovers. Some students thin

admin2012-11-22  38

问题    More and more adult students are renting fiats to live away from campus, and some of them are student lovers. Some students think it unacceptable, but others think it OK. What’s your opinion?
   Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
                                          On Cohabitation of Student Lovers
   You are to write in three parts.
   In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
   In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.
   In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
   Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a toss of marks.

选项

答案 On Cohabitation of Student Lovers Nowadays, student lovers appear more and more on campus. Some of them choose to cohabit to make their relationship more intimate. But I don’t think it is appropriate for the student lovers to live together. Firstly, students can not make money to rent a house, let alone to buy a house, so they have to get money from their, parents in order to have a place to live. Even if student lovers can afford to rent a house, which provides more time and space for them to stay together, it will waste them a lot of time for study. Secondly, student lovers’ cohabitation will isolate them from communicating with their classmates and friends. Some time later, they will find that they not only lose the time and energy to study but also lose their friendship. Thirdly, many students have their lovers. If all of them cohabited and lived outside of campus, it would be difficult for the school administration to manage such situation. Last but not least, before the student lovers intend to move out of the campus, they should consider the security problems. After all, the social condition is more complicated than campus’. Taking all these negative elements of student lovers’ cohabitation into consideration, we should think before we leap. Stay secure in your dormitory, enjoy your time with your friends and classmates, you will feel your college life more colorful than only live with your lover.

解析 题目的意思是就“大学生恋人同居”现象发表自己的看法。权衡利弊,大学生恋人同居弊大于利。所以文章可就此观点直接论述其弊端;大学生变人同居花销大;占据学习时间;容易疏远与同学、朋友的关第;不利于学校管理;存在安全隐患。综合对这些弊端的考虑,文章得出结论,在校学习的恋人不要同居,毕竟同学们、朋友们生活在一起的大学生活要比仅同恋人相处的生活更丰富多彩。全文从开头到结论围绕中心意思展开,整篇作文就显得重点突出,论据充分。
转载请注明原文地址:https://kaotiyun.com/show/tWhK777K
0

最新回复(0)