For this part, you are allowed SO minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Smoking Be Banned in Public Places? You should

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问题 For this part, you are allowed SO minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Smoking Be Banned in Public Places? You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.
1.近年来越来越多的公共场所禁烟
2.这项举措在受到拥护的同时也引发了争议
3.我的看法
                Should Smoking Be Banned in Public Places?

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答案 Should Smoking Be Banned in Public Places? In recent years, smoking has been banned in many public places such as shops, restaurants, and even bus stops. This regulation has triggered much dispute. On the one hand, many welcome the ban since lots of illnesses and deaths are smoking-related, and this is a very sensible step to improve people’s health and living condition. On the other hand, however, smokers consider it is unfair to ban smoking. It is their right to smoke, and they are not committing any crime, so the government should not ban that. In my view, to ban smoking is a long term process, during which education rather than enforcement is more likely to be the key to the success. Banning smoking in the public areas is a policy that should be implemented step by step.

解析     这篇作文要求考生结合社会现象论述自己的观点。可如下组织行文结构:
    先提出越来越多的公共场所禁烟这个现象,也可顺带提出这个现象的社会背景(最容易想到的是由吸烟引发的健康问题,以及禁烟可给人们营造一种干净、舒适的环境等)。
    再指出这一规定引发反响,从拥护和反对这两个角度来说。
    最后简要提出自己的观点,可针对上段中说到的拥护和争议,在其间找到一个平衡点,提出自己的观点以及解决办法等。
    总的来说,拥护的理由好说,关键是提出什么样的争议。可从法规执行的难度,惩罚措施是否适当等方面进行论述。范文是从吸烟者的自由权利遭损害这个角度来说的。
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