For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Compliments by commenting on Mark Tw

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Compliments by commenting on Mark Twain’s remark "I can live for two months on a good compliment." You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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答案 The Importance of Compliments Compliments are necessary in our life as they encourage people and warm their hearts. They have such a tremendous effect that Mark Twain even remarked, "I can live for two months on a good compliment." As far as I am concerned, compliments are essential to our life for the following three reasons. Firstly, compliments from others build our confidence and inspire our potentials. Here is a story to illustrate this point. There was a child who was often scorned by others for he was slow in study. But his mother never stopped giving him compliments. Little by little, he built up confidence, made much progress and finally entered a famous university. Secondly, compliments in our daily life bring us harmony and happiness. Receiving compliments makes us more confident and become friendly to the givers. What’s more, the significance of compliments has also been proved by psychological studies, which show that compliments to the soul is like water to the body. Good compliments can help us to win people’s hearts, promote friendships, and improve our life. So be generous to give your heartfelt compliments to the people around you!

解析     第一段第一句便开门见山地指出赞美是生活中的必需品,它可以鼓励人们并温暖人们的心灵。下一句接着引入马克?吐温的著名言论:一句赞美的话可以让我生活两个月。
    第二段给出了赞美如此重要的三条理由。第一,赞美可以帮助人们建立信心,激发潜力;第二,日常生活中的赞美给我们带来了和谐和幸福;第三,心理研究也证明了赞美的重要性。第一条理由中讲述了一个故事:母亲通过称赞孩子来帮助他建立自信并获得进步,最终孩子考上了名牌大学。这个例证充分说明了赞美的重要性,形象有力。
    第三段重申赞美的重要性,总结全文。
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