Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and then
    3) give your comments.
    You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
   

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答案 This picture features two things, the spider web and the "cubicle farm". The spider web is of course our modern metaphor for the Internet, which connects one point to every other point, thus allowing a web user to access a great deal of information. Being interconnected like this is what makes the Internet so popular, as people can communicate with anyone in a variety of ways from all over the world. People are at their desks on the "cubicle farm" using the computers, but without a lot of face to face contact with people around. Some people might argue that the Internet allows people to always stay in touch, make more friends and even find romance online, while a side effect is that sometimes it makes people more isolated. Some people stay in their homes and only make online friends, chat online and never experience direct human contact. If their average day at work is like this too, then the Internet may be a curse rather than a blessing.

解析     范文正确解读了图画的深层含义,主题思想鲜明,论述的层次清晰严谨,论据紧紧围绕中心,合乎逻辑性。第一段概括了图画反映出的寓意,第二段分析了遇到困境相互帮助的必要性,第三段提出了如何发扬互帮互助的精神。句子与句子、段落与段落之间采用了多种衔接手法,过渡自然通畅,整体性强。
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