For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Changes of Urban Green Coverage Ratio based on the

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Changes of Urban Green Coverage Ratio based on the statistics provided in the bar graph below. Please convey the information in the graph. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
   

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答案 The Changes of Urban Green Coverage Ratio (1)As is shown in the graph, the green coverage ratio of a city is continuously rising from 44.4% in 2013 to 46.8% in 2016.(2)This phenomenon implies that the city government is paying increasing attention to the green coverage ratio. (3)I believe the changes are caused by the following reasons.(4)Firstly, environment deterioration in cities is a great threat to people’ s health, so we have to increase green coverage ratio in urban areas.(5)Secondly, more modern buildings and infrastructures in cities leave a little space for many other species. Thus, making green lands shows human being’s care for other species.(6)Third, green space embodies the harmony between human beings and the nature. The past economic development makes us realize that the quality of people’s life depends on how we treat the nature. (7)The changes of urban green coverage ratio suggest that nature becomes increasingly important in modern society. It is certain that green open space will make a city suitable for living.

解析 第一段描述图表并指出反映的问题。
第二段分析问题产生的原因。
第三段总结全文,再次点明主题。
(1)总体概括了2013年~2016年城市绿化覆盖率的变化。
(2)点出文章主题,引出下文。
(3)下文详细阐述引起这种变化的原因。
(4)(5)(6)层次分明,条理清晰。
(7)总结全文。
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